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grif Post at 20-8-2009 20:16

Make A Story Contest! - Stage 2

[quote]Long time ago, in a galaxy far far away...[/quote]

[b]Required words:[/b]
Princess, Jump, Dragon, Starship, Pollux

Note: Pollux is a name. You may use it in any fashion you wish. That goes to all the other words, you may use it as a name or just as a noun. Your choice.

PS: Remember the 200 words limit apply now.[i=s] Post Last Edit by grif at 20-8-2009 20:17 [/i]

Xyprex Post at 20-8-2009 20:43

Long time ago, in a galaxy far far away. There is a planet called the Shinra. On the planet live a very beautiful [b]princess [/b]called Cici. But ironically, there is a evil warlord who rules the lane of Shinra. He wanted Cici to become his wife but Cici refused to. Just before the evil warlord trying to tease her body. Here comes a hero, riding a red [b]dragon[/b] trying to save the princess from the warlord. His name is Son-Goku. He [b]jump[/b]ed down from the [b]dragon[/b] and turn in Super Saiyan 4 in order to match the warlord standard. The red aura of 'Qi' surrounding Goku while the black aura of 'Qi' surrounding the evil warlord. The evil warlord called reinforment from the [b]starship [/b]squad leaded by[b] Pollux [/b]to help him. Goku was struggling throughout the fight. Out from nowhere, he heard Cici shouting for him. He promised her to take her back to her father. In a second time, he turned into Super Saiyan 5 and used 1000000x Kamekameha to kill all his enemy including the evil warlordz. The villagers chill for Goku. Finally, the land back in peace again.

bestiallord Post at 20-8-2009 20:47

Long time ago, in a galaxy far far away...there was a crystal land....

human were found living there. Human there had differ organism and body system compared to you and me because of their living condition. Due to their gravity force is great enough, even light with the velocity of 3x10^8 also  unable to leave the crystal land. No matter how they tried, how height they [color=DarkOrchid]jump[b][/b][/color]ed, still just didn't help.

There was a [color=DarkOrchid]princess[b][/b][/color] who married to with a normal guy named [b][color=DarkOrchid]Pollux[/color][/b]. After their marriage, princess had became queen and well known as Queen of Pain. Pollux wanted to please his queen, he invented many kind of mechanism just to hope it works for his queen to leave that land, at once he created a [b][color=DarkOrchid]starship[/color][/b] with [color=DarkOrchid]dragon[b][/b][/color] outshape which is their religion's symbol. Hoping that it would receive energy from their dragon god to escape from that land. Unfortunately Pollux was died in an accident in one of his experiment.

Queen of Pain was sad and charging her power to max and waved out her ultimate skill sonic wave to send her husband, Pollux to sky, who knows? Her ultimate skill is the key! where it's velocity much faster than light speed. So after this, Queen of Pain sent all her citizens out from that land and ended up, she became alone stay in the planet as without her sonic wave, she has no way to send herself out

shawnnaux Post at 20-8-2009 21:25

long time ago, in a galaxy far away, a notorious dragon faced merchant by the name of Pollux asked around the town of BuBu for information about the princess of town Baba. Most villagers there praised her magnificent beauty, and using this information, Pollux hatched up a plan for a get-rich-very-quick scheme...
With unsurpassed stealth, Pollux went to BaBa, and capture the very appealing princess Ugly. He then sell it to a whorehouse in town BuBu, and earned himself enough money to last forever.
And Pollux lived happily ever after, the end. :D

Isn't this one awesome fairy tale?

marcusow1986 Post at 20-8-2009 22:30

Long time ago, in a galaxy far far away, there exist a planet where [b]dragon[/b]s and humans are at war for over a thousand years. However, the situation are going to change when the dragon queen gave birth to a baby dragon- [b]Princess [/b]Onyxia. The night when she was born,  the skies brightens and the whole castle was delighted to receive her into this world. Princess Onyxia is very special, at the age of 12, she possesses the power to communicate with human and that power will change the future of all dragon as well as human race in the planet of Eternia.

While the dragon-kins are having their joyous moment sharing the happy news with everyone, [b]Pollux[/b], the evil dragon warlock had a premonition,  in his omen, he saw both races co-existing and  living in peace. He immediately [b]jump[/b] to action to stop that from happening.

First, he went to see the dragon king and persuaded him to launch an assault on the castle where the human king, queen and a young prince lives. He then uses his ability to transform into his human form and visited King Andathor- the human king of Eternia and warn him about the assault from their dragon nemesis.

With the news and information so accurately brought into his arms, he instructed Cid, the commander of Valkyrie [b]starship[/b] to launch an initiate attack in hope to gain the upper-hand....

kenji Post at 20-8-2009 22:44

[color=Green]Long time ago, in a galaxy far far away… there lies a world in which it was divided into three powers; the knights, the witches, and the [b]Pollux[/b]. It has been hundreds of years since their first battle and yet, victory is still uncertain. The knights with their wise [b]princess[/b] supporting them, managed to devise many tactics to counter enemy’s technology and magic, but are unable to attack them due to their lack of firepower. The witches on the other hand, summon great beasts from the ancient time such as hydra and [b]dragon[/b] with the help of their Elven Queen which has learn even the darkest magic the world could offer. Lastly, it was [b]Pollux[/b]; a tribe that focuses on technology and science. They design robots, [b]starships[/b] and even nuclear weapons just for the sake of winning the war even if they have to destroy everything else. The wars will continue and will not end until only one power was left. Will it be the knights, the witches, the [b]Pollux[/b] or maybe there will be some other tribe that will [b]jump[/b] in and intervene their war? The story will unfold shortly… along with the cries of those that have fallen.[/color]

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[color=Blue]Off topic!
Ya it's an awesome and 'happy' fairy tale all right, but it use quite some Unique way to gain it :o[/color][i=s] Post Last Edit by kenji at 20-8-2009 22:45 [/i][i=s] Post Last Edit by kenji at 20-8-2009 23:34 [/i]

Prick Post at 21-8-2009 02:29

Long time ago, in a galaxy far far away, two race were at war. The [b]Pollux[/b] and the Septim. Caught in the middle of their warfare were the humans, who were, scouring the space for lifeforms. The battle went on as if forever. Eons later, the humans developed a strange power, the power of telepathy. The [b]princess[/b], Fate, sensed a strange, dark force rising into play as the battle still waged on. Needing to warn both parties about the growing threat, she quickly boarded the [b]starship[/b], The Amendments. Using it's warp [b]jump[/b] technology, the Amendments should reach Xion, where the battle takes place, in time.

The ship arrived within the communication range but the signal was jammed. Unbeknownst to Fate, Xion was under siege by the [b]Dragon[/b]s. What appeared to be a war between the Pollux and the Septim that lasted countless of eons quickly turned into a slaughter fest of both parties. The Pollux, the Septim, and the humans quickly banded together to face a new threat. In the midst of chaos, a truce was born. But for how long will it last? Will they ever survive? A whole new never ending war was born since that day.

ghost[rambo] Post at 21-8-2009 02:40

Long time ago, in a galaxy far far away...there is another planet as sama as earth which is owned by non-human. The leader ,[color=DeepSkyBlue]POLLUX[/color] who is the only one [color=DeepSkyBlue]PRINCESS[/color] among the[color=DeepSkyBlue] DRAGON[/color],leader felt that their generation should growth bigger,well know by everyone in the galaxy and next had a dream to own the whole galaxy. Because of they are special species of dragon which just got the [color=DeepSkyBlue]JUMP[/color] ability but cant fly, they use 10year to make their own [color=DeepSkyBlue]STARSHIP[/color] and start going through the galaxy.

xXAgent47Xx Post at 21-8-2009 09:28

[b]Long time ago, in a galaxy far far away[/b], in a system called [b]Pollux[/b], there lived the noble and highly advanced race of [b]Dragons[/b]. Such was their reputation, galactic traders traded with them in the hopes of gaining even a glimpse on their secrets.

As peace is itself fragile, there soon came the sound of war, firstly through rumors and then survivor testimonies. It was being waged by the ancient yet evil Pulloxians, a race once thought to have been wiped out and sealed but never forgotten. Led by their[b] Princess[/b], the Pulloxians began their assault on the system using their ancient yet powerful starships to conquer. With their princess in their main [b]starship[/b], Gallus, they set course to the homeworld of the dragons.

However, the dragons knew of this day from lessons and warnings inscribed into their hearts by their elders through numerous teachings and soon geared up for war. As the Pulloxians descended upon them, an elite team of dragoons known as Dragoons, infiltrated the Gallus. Thanks to their technology, they quickly slayed the vile princess using their trademark skill, [b]Jump[/b]. Without the princess, the Pulloxians retreated into unknown space and so, peace returned but for how long?


(damn you 200 words =(  )

ut4d4hik4ru Post at 21-8-2009 14:42

[color=Magenta]Long time ago, in a galaxy far far away where stars shines brightly like the diamonds in the sky. There was a huge [b]starship[/b] floating all around the galaxy to search for a treasure. [b]Pollux[/b], a treasure hunter was the one that driving that huge starship. She has been searching for the treasure since she was 16 along with her pal, Fluffeh, a cute little baby [b]dragon[/b]. Life goes on. Pollux is still trying to achieved her goal. Unfortunately one day, there is huger starship, more like a battlecruiser, chasing after Pollux's starship. The battlecruiser starts to fire laser beams towards Pollux's starship and she successfully avoid some. However, there are some missiles that hits the engine of the starship, causing the entire starship sinks. As the the starship sinks, the battlecruiser rescue that sinking starship. As Pollux and Fluffeh landed safely, Pollux [b]jump[/b] out from the wrecked starship.

Pollux: "Oh... It is you, daddy... And Sebastian..."
Sebastian: "Oh God bless you [b]princess[/b]... You know how worried are we my dear princess..."
Pollux's Dad: "Pollux, its been 2 years since you were gone... I knew you were traveling all around the galaxy with that starship... Why did you left without telling us??? We know you love to travel around... But do you know how dangerous that would be???"
Pollux: "I'm sorry daddy... I promise I would not do that again..."[/color]

grif Post at 21-8-2009 17:08

Alright, Stage 2 closed.

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